Fred is in love with a good girl; a girl who does not love him because he is not worthy; Fred agrees with her. Maybe the point is this: of all the people striving in Middlemarch, only Fred is striving for a thing worth striving for. Dorothea mistakes Casaubon terribly, as Lydgate mistakes Rosamund, but Fred thinks Mary is worth having, that she is probably a good in the world, or at least, good for him ("She is the best girl I know!") - and he's right. Of all of them Fred has neither chosen a chimerical good, nor radically mistaken his own nature. He's not as dim as he seems. He doesn't idealise his good as Dorothea does when she imagines Casaubon a second Milton, and he doesn't settle on a good a priori, like Lydgate, who has long believed that a doting, mindless girl is just what a man of science needs. What Fred surmises of the good he stumbles upon almost by accident, and only as a consequence of being fully in life and around life, by being open to its vagaries simply because he is in possession of no theory to impose upon it.A bit later on,
If Fred didn't love Mary, he would have no reason to exercise his imagination on her family. It's love that makes him realise that two women without their savings are a real thing in the world and not merely incidental to his own sense of dishonour. It's love that enables him to feel another's pain as if it were his own. For Eliot, in the absence of God, all our moral tests must take place on this earth and have their rewards and punishments here. We are each other's lesson, each other's duty. This turns out to be a doctrine peculiarly suited to a certain kind of novel writing. Middlemarch is a dazzling dramatisation of earthly human striving.I don't feel Smith is as smart about the form of Middlemarch as she is about some of its themes and philosophical interests. Near the end she remarks that the novel "seems to hint at those doubts in the efficacy of narrative that were to follow in the next century. Why always Dorothea, why heroes, why the centrality of a certain character in a narrative, why narrative at all? Eliot, being a Victorian, did not go all the way down that road." I don't see "why narrative at all?" as one of Eliot's questions--which may, perhaps, have something to do with being Victorian, but Smith's phrasing has the patronizing undertones of modernism. Eliot was not trying to get away from narrative (is that even possible?) but to revise it, and particularly to get away from linearity (which may, in fact, be what Smith means by "narrative"). She tackles the problem Carlyle identified (a century before the "next century" Smith refers to) about the "efficacy of narrative"--"narrative is linear, action is solid"--with a construction full of complex returns, repetitions, and doubling back, as well as the famous shifts in point of view epitomized, as Smith notes, in the question "But why always Dorothea?"
I also think Smith is not being careful enough when she moves, at the end of her piece, to make Middlemarch a stand-in for a totalizing category of the "19th-century English novel." Middlemarch does things no other novel did in the 19th century. But so, in a very different way, did Vanity Fair or Bleak House or Barchester Towers. She wants to lump them all in together for her own polemical purposes, to reject what she sees as a lingering Victorianism and call for something new:
That 19th-century English novels continue to be written today with troubling frequency is a tribute to the strength of Eliot's example and to the nostalgia we feel for that noble form. Eliot would be proud. But should we be? For where is our fiction, our 21st-century fiction?These objections seem a bit odd coming from someone who has often been labelled "Dickensian," though (as I've briefly discussed before) this label seems only loosely applicable in her case. What exactly does she mean by it? Presumably she means that many novelists today use techniques and conventions also used in the 19th century--but surely this does not a 19th-century novel make. Victorian novelists have been understood as writing historical novels about their own present--this investigative impulse may also continue in the work of contemporary novelists. But the world itself has changed; isn't there novelty in that alone? Eliot talks about the effects of a "microscope directed on a water drop"--but changing the slide, while keeping the equipment, is not necessarily a conservative or nostalgic choice. You use the tools you need to get the job done. Can't novelists read their world and craft their insights into narrative without losing credibility? To me, this call to 'make it new' is an unnecessary polemical flourish at the end of a good piece, the most important talking point of which should really be,
It's a mistake to hate Middlemarch because the pollsters love it. That would be to denude oneself of one of those good things of the world that Spinoza advised we cling to.